Let me be free

22 05 2008

His shadow fall on me

I’m just trapped and could not be free

When he waited the answer of me

I just fall on my knee

The heart of mine already bound

No one could ever found

I try to make it sinking down

’til my heart and my mind has no more sound

Where is the hope that I’m waiting for?

Doesn’t he know that still for him my heart is longing for?

Just let me know that no need I’m waiting you for more

Then to the world I will go for another explore


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23 05 2008
Nisha

Just let me know that no need I’m waiting you for more
Then to the world I will go for another explore

Kenapa menunggu pemberitahuan (kek pengumuman kelulusan ajah hihihi).
Why can’t u just decide whether keep waiting or move on to another explore. I mean, enough is enough, right. It is a jungle outthere, tapi ndak seru juga kelamaan dalam kenyamanan semu. Explore, wow, pilihan kata yang encouraging fang. Cool!

Keren sangad tuh tekadnya. Lebih keren kalo tidak sekedar menunggu jawaban atau pemberitahuan karena bukankah always a hero inside us. Jadi, look inside and sesekali dengerin kata hati. Kata hati yang paling dalam itu ndak pernah salah kok, cuma sering terabaikan.

Selalu memompa semangad! Thanks yah, dah remind me too. And puisi yang makin caem nih, enak dibaca dan dimengerti.

2 06 2008
herm1en

thank u…
semangat …
tekad…
and jadi kuat…

2 06 2008
phie-phie

pang….
english bo!!
hiks…kok kaya “itu” ya pang??
pang-pang selalu TOP :D
hhm….sang tutornya juga loh…..:P

5 06 2008
herm1en

Apa sih Pi?
“itu” yang mana nih?
“itu” mu?
smurf mu apa smurf mu?
mari smurf smua smurf…
hidup smurf…
hahahaaa…

lg2 ttg smurf?

6 06 2008
Nisha

untuk men-smurf yang kurang smurf harus pake smurf. dan, se-smurf smurf nya smurf, harus tetep di-smurf setiap saat.

kolor header nya smurf sangad. sangat smurf dan too smurf to be smurf.

keep smurf-ing! :D

10 06 2008
phie-phie

ahaha kok jadi saling men-smurf?
adoh pang, ini gara-gara km yang ngingetin tentang smurf….
mari bersmurf…cheers

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